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离别(诗)
Posted: 07-11-06 Tue 5:33 pm
by shuning
望着你的离去
泪水掉了下来
手中依然握着
那思念的枫叶
Posted: 08-11-06 Wed 5:07 pm
by Kathy Teng
一点都不像诗嘛~~~

Posted: 08-11-06 Wed 6:35 pm
by 蓝天的思念
Kathy Teng wrote:一点都不像诗嘛~~~

什么不像诗??
只是她的诗感觉上像唐诗般有规律...
Posted: 08-11-06 Wed 9:42 pm
by 容淑维
是有点短,但却满满的思念。
Posted: 08-11-06 Wed 10:48 pm
by shuning
谢谢

哈哈,那到底像不像诗呢

Posted: 09-11-06 Thu 2:39 pm
by 容淑维
说像它倒很像...
总之最重要要表达的东西都呈现出来啦!

Posted: 09-11-06 Thu 3:28 pm
by Kathy Teng
mana像诗!?